User:Katiem3410/Surveillance capitalism/Juliahamilton12 Peer Review

Hi Katie!

Just a few random questions for you as I'm reading:


 * you mention 16 reasons why companies are possibly getting away with surveillance capitalism. What are those reasons? I was super intrigued by that statement and I'm curious as to what the reasons are.
 * I wonder if your source from the New York Times is too biased. Upon reading what's in your sandbox, it seems pretty clear how they feel about surveillance capitalism, and it feels a little bit more persuasive than informative due to the language used in the quote.

It doesn't look like you're adding anything so far to the John Bellamy Foster section, but if you can find sources, I think that would really balance out the article. It looks like there's a lot of content on Zuboff, which is great and provides lots of context, but the Foster section seems empty.

Thanks!

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