User:Katpepper13/Urban Surrealism/Bookieeikoob Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username): Katpepper13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Katpepper13/Urban_Surrealism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Urban Surrealism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead - User is using provided lead statement from the already existing page on urban surrealism.

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Yes, the content added provides a good base for the focused subtopic of urban surrealist visual arts.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, the references used are pretty up to date as they are from the early 2000s. When looking for additional articles, perhaps you could look for more recent references, maybe even from the past decade to ensure the information is up to date.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? - When we went over each others articles in class, you mentioned a range of information you were planning on adding. I think that once you add that information, you can sort the already existing content into different subtopics, such as application (urban surrealist visual arts and the information you mentioned on how the medium is applied), its history (you briefly mentioned already in the passage you wrote), and its impact (you mentioned "In urban spaces, surrealism and distaste for the ‘ordinary’ have gradually intertwined in cityscapes and are now important and calculated additions to urban sprawl.").
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? - Yes, the topic you have chosen seems to have very limited information on its Wikipedia page and currently has only one reference.

Tone and Balance


 * Tone remains neutral throughout entire article and avoids a persuasive/biased approach.

Sources and References


 * All sources are reliable secondary secondary sources and reflect the content within those websites into this article
 * I would definitely recommend adding at least 3 more sources in order to make your work more credible and to add in text citations with the sources you already have when you use information from those websites

Organization


 * Since you are adding additional information, not only about the subtopic of urban surrealist visual arts, but also some history and its impact on our current society, I think it can be beneficial to sort these different categories and organize them into subtopics with each their own paragraph.

Additional information


 * are there any images you can add to showcase urban surrealist visual arts?
 * Goodluck with the rest of the project!