User:KatyEmery

Expert Articles
1. Palm Desert High School I am an expert on this topic because I attended the high school for four years. The article is accurate overall, though it lacks references in certain areas. The only thing I would change is that in the beginning the article mentions the junior high schools that people could have attended before attending Palm Desert High School but it does not mention John Glenn Middle School.

2. Indio, California I believe I am an expert on Indio, California because I was born there and have lived there for all 19 years of my life. I think the article is very thorough and has many references. The only change I would make would be to the section on "Geography." Indio is a desert and is located in the Colorado desert, but no mention of that is made.

3. Coachella Valley Music and Arts Festival I think I am an expert on this article because the music festival occurs about five miles from my house and I have attended it more than once. The article is extremely thorough and lists all of the bands that have ever played there. I think the article might be more helpful if it included tips about what to bring/not bring, what to expect, ect; the desert is extremely hot when Coachella Fest takes place and many people from out of town are not prepared for it.

4. Kurt Vonnegut  I believe I am an expert on this article because Vonnegut is one of my favorite authors and I have read almost all of his novels. There is nothing that I think is lacking in this article because it has information about both his professional and personal life. All of the information is cited, there is a long list of references.

5. Arrested Development (TV Series) I think I am an expert on this article because Arrested Development is my favorite television series and I have seen every season completely through at least three times. The article has many references but when it comes to the "Feature Film" plans, the article delves into speculation instead of fact.

Indio, California, Wikipedia 2
Adding information to the "Geography" section for Indio, California: Indio is one of the desert cities in the Coachella Valley, which is located in the Colorado Desert.

I would also add a picture to illustrate what the Indio desert looks like: []