User:Katy Shi/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:Alcohol abuse

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because I think alcoholism is a serious topic, which has many negative effects, such as violence and crime.

Evaluate the article
This article is composed of opinions and opinions from different people, so there is no good introduction, and the title of this article only has the word "alcoholism". After reading these contents, I feel the layout is a little messy. Some ideas are fairly neutral, such as the fact that drinking alcohol affects the brain's control centers, can lead to many health problems and impair one's judgment. The article is divided into 14 parts, not all of which are supported by reliable data. And there are no corresponding images to reflect the theme. But these users raised a lot of questions. Overall, I don't think this is an informative article, and only a few parts are easy to understand.