User:KautharIbrahim/Service-learning/Cameronkalantar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KautharIbrahim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KautharIbrahim/Service-learning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall love the additions that you made to this article on service learning. I find that it does encompass a more holistic view of the topic and your critique of certain aspects of service-learning and community service help my understanding. With that said I find some aspects can be added or improved to make the information more complete. Specifically, when providing information on service learning, I think including a more direct definition initially would benefit the article. Organizationally speaking I believe it may be more beneficial to start with an introduction to service learning and definitions and then go into the critiques as to how it is right now. While I get how overall you are setting up critiques of service-learning to then go into critical service learning I think it would be better to provide more of an introduction to service-learning than dive into its critiques. Overall, I enjoyed your additional information on the critique as I think it makes it more complete.