User:Kawilke22/Freedom Riders/Heruiter21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kawilke22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kawilke22/Freedom_Riders?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freedom Riders

Evaluate the drafted changes
I did not understand the fourth paragraph you put in the rough draft, I don't know how badly it needs to be in the article. Theres not a lot you can add to your article so I think you did a good job doing what you can. Some of the paragraphs look plagiarized, so maybe put some of the sentences in your own words.