User:Kawilke22/Freedom Riders/Marcelvacation7791 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kawilke22, Wikitalks22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kawilke22/Freedom_Riders?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freedom Riders

Does the lead have an introductory sentence that describes the article's topic?
The lead sentence does not make sense. It is too wordy and does not apply to the article overall; consider rewording it to make it more concise.

Does the lead include information that is not included in the rest of the article?
Overall, the lead does not include information that is relevant to the article. It provides history of the Civil Rights movement and then briefly mentions the Freedom Riders, opposed to the whole paragraph being about them. As a reader, I was unsure of what I was reading about.

Is there content missing?
The content that is written does not have headers on them, so there appears to be gaps in the content. The information itself seems to be good, it just needs to be reshaped slightly to flow better.

Overall, this article seems to have the appropriate information. Focus on flow and relevance when making edits. I also noticed some small typos throughout, so be sure to watch those and check your grammar.