User:Kay1017/Cambria County Jail/Gbakes11 Peer Review

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Kay1017


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I think that it's a good idea to add your own section, that will keep the article organized and easy to navigate. For this part, "But after leaving a farewell letter to the warden, he managed to escape without a trace." I would think about exploring that a little more and seeing if there 's further information that might've been missed. For the subsection under "Escape of Michael "Smitty" Smith", I would add a title or just make a whole new section because details about other paranormal activity don' relate too too well with a story of escaped convicts, A subsection title like "Executions and Paranormal Activity'' I think is a good example. the history section looks pretty good otherwise, the only thing that I would say is to maybe reorder the paragraphs but its probably fine how it is. Architecture section looks great, well put together and looks like part of the article already to be honest. television and media section also looks great, I cant really pick out anything that could change. the section that you're going to add in the beginning also looks good, i think its also good that you' re keeping the article up to date.