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Meadville Area Senior High School
Meadville Area Senior High School

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This is the high school that I attended before going to college

Evaluate the article
Lead section:

- Clearly states that article subject is

- highlighted major sections of the article

- overly detailed

-Facts are given in the introduction that should not be there

Content:

- Organized with headings

- statistics related to subject

- needs up-dated

- New content could be added

Tone and Balance

- tone is consistently neutral

- poverty is talked about, not in a critical way

- no bias opinion

- no persuasion

- no part was more heavy on information than the other

 Sources and references 

- sources up to date

* Information in article can be updated

- links to sources work

- arrivals sources have back up information

 Organization and Writing Quality 

-information broken down into sections

- Divided by headings

- Content could be more spread out

- Easy to read could be made easier

- To many facts in one paragraph

* put into list

 Images and Media 

- no images

-add images that help explain parts of the school

 Talk Page Discussion 

- discussions consist of updates to external links

- discussion is related to the articles topic

Overall Impressions

- Overall touches on all parts of the subject

- The article could use some updates

* Provided in sources

- Strengths are focused on the "Academics"

- Improvements should be made

-The article is not fully developed but not under developed

- A variety of information is provided for readers

-No obvious grammar errors

- Length of the article is reasonable

-Strong but needs updated Statistics