User:Kayap1/Moisturizer/Vinceo0316 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kayap1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kayap1/Moisturizer?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moisturizer

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article body you contributed was well written and informative. I like all the links you added to the terms that might not be well known, such as transepidermal water loss, or lipid bilayer. The information was neutral and straight to the point. However, I had trouble clicking on the reference link. When I clicked on the "^" symbol, I did not get taken to the website listed. I suggest adding the link the same way you added it to the terms you used in the paragraph.

Lastly, I would have liked to see more information added to the article. I'm not sure if the website is just glitching on my end, but I can only see one paragraph and one link in the sandbox draft.

All in all, I think the contribution you made suits the article well.