User:Kaydaugherty/Pediatric nursing/Gzycc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaydaugherty


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaydaugherty/Pediatric_nursing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pediatric nursing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the content that you plan on adding to the article would greatly benefit the article as a whole. All of the edits are completely factual as well as related to pediatric nursing.The edits seemed to remain neutral as they stayed relatively broad, but also adding useful information to then article. The editor did a good job explaining what pediatric nurses do on a day- to - day basis without getting too medical so that the information would make sense to everyone reading the article and not just other pediatric nurses or people in related fields. One thing that the editor could do to improve the edits and the article in general would be to more clearly point out exactly what they are adding to the article and where they are going to do so. It can be slightly difficult to pinpoint where in the article some of the edits would go in the main article. It would also be good to add some more in depth edits that focus on a specific part of pediatric nursing. Overall I think the editor did a fantastic job editing this article by providing helpful facts about pediatric nursing to the article.