User:KayleeT1127/Bear-baiting/Turtleduck71 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: KayleeT1127


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KayleeT1127/Bear-baiting?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bear-baiting

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks fantastic! The only thing I had a question about was under the Mexico section. The account by Evans reads somewhat like a paraphrased quote so I am not sure if it needs quotations or not. Otherwise this looks great!