User:Kayleehussey/Phidippus audax/Alexa.patria Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kayleehussey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phidippus audax - Wikipedia
 * Phidippus audax - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section does not appear to have been updated, but it already mentions the unique eyes of the jumping spider, which was expanded on in the edits. The lead is concise and informative about the topic. A few of the sections are not mentioned in the lead, but I am not sure if it is necessary due to the shortness of the article. The content is recent information that is relevant to the topic. Kaylee fixed the grammatical errors, and the content is organized well. The only thing I wish was mentioned was the diet of the jumping spider, but other than that I feel the article is pretty thorough. All of the edits made were neutrally worded. I only saw one source added, but it is relevant to vision of the spider. The images are visually appealing, well formatted and described, and help understand the visual appearance of the spider. All of them also appear to adhere to Wikipedia copyright regulations. Overall, I thought this article was pleasant and easy to read, she did a good job editing thus far.