User:Kayleehussey/Phidippus audax/Font153 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kayleehussey)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kayleehussey/Phidippus_audax?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phidippus audax

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article's drafted changes are all relevant to the article and added beneficial additional information. There are additions of the new sections such as "Predators" which highlights an area that was previously lacking any information. There are also good expansions on existing portions of the articles. For example, this is new (and cited) information under "bites" which includes treatments which could prove especially useful information for people who may be seeking information after receiving a bite. Additionally, all of the new information remains unbiased in its presentation. There a lot of good sources that come from reputable sources with working liks. However, a source should be found and added to the information provided in the "Conservation Status" of the article.