User:Kayleeso/Omobranchus obliquus/Furunol Peer Review

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Kayleeso
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kayleeso/Omobranchus_obliquus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Omobranchus obliquus

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Hi Kaylee,

When looking through your Sandbox Draft I unfortunately was unable to find your first draft within it. Just in case you did not have time last week to begin working on your first draft some suggestions I can give is to add the topics that Professor recommended in week 3 which are the lead section, description (includes anatomy & morphology), distribution & habitat, Human use & cultural significance. All these topics would be very good additions to your species current article since the only information currently available is a small description of where your species can be found and its scientific and Hawaiian name. Another suggestion/advice that I can give is that if finding information on your species is a problem, sometimes you may have to extensively search through sources for the smallest of documented information that is available for your species. One source that I found that may help you get started https://www.proquest.com/docview/276151114?pq-origsite=gscholar&fromopenview=true&sourcetype=Dissertations%20&%20Theses has a good amount of information detailing the distribution and habitat of the Omobranchus obliquus, physical and anatomic descriptions of this species, as well as reproductive facts also.

Best of luck,

Landen Furuno