User:Kayoff/Psychogenic pain/Psychcap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kayoff


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kayoff/Psychogenic_pain?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks good and it summarizes the major points of psychogenic pain. I cannot tell if everything in the sandbox is the lead. I am guessing it is broken up into the articles body but having that distinguished is necessary. I think there is a need for more citation throughout the sandbox. The information seems to have a neutral tone. Everything is explained thoroughly. After reviewing the whole article I see there is not much to work with during this time. I would love to see some treatment protocols for psychogenic pain in the end of this article. It is easy to read and I don't see any spelling errors. Both sources listed are very current. The additions seem to be well written and give a good detailed description of what psychogenic pain is and how it affect individuals. There are no images included yet but for no other reasons than I find appealing I like seeing pictures. A good contribution was made to a sparse article.