User:Kayoff/Psychogenic pain/Srivera6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

kayoff


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kayoff/Psychogenic_pain?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychogenic pain

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I wonder if there is a better way to word the chunk in the lead article that is pretty much a paragraph of quote. I know this is not something you added, but maybe there is a way you can improve upon it and steer away from the quotes.

Your article is pretty simple and not too in depth. This leaves a lot of room for you to work with (a good thing and a bad thing!). I think something you can and should definitely elaborate on is the final sentence you added to the lead paragraph. You can add a lot of information on both the diagnosis and the treatment of psychogenic pain! I think this will provide you with lots of information to add into the overall article.

A few of the sources being used in your article are a little out of date. Maybe you can try to find the information they are presenting in a newer source, or maybe the information itself is also out of date. If so, it would be ideal to remove it from the article!