User:Kayyaguirre/David McClelland/Atustudent4 Peer Review

General info
Kayyaguirre
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kayyaguirre/David McClelland
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):David McClelland

Evaluate the drafted changes
While reviewing your article I was impressed with the well written article. The information you added will make the wiki page better. You also improved credibility with added sources and links to the sources. While reviewing I noticed a few punctuation errors that I added corrections too. You keep a neutral and unbiased approach in your writing and it will greatly improve the Wikipedia page. Great work!