User:Kbee2/An Son, Vietnam/Julie Foss Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbee2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbee2/An_Son%2C_Vietnam?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content of this page is relevant and organized well. Each section lays out topical information, with clear and concise elaboration. The topics are laid out well, and there are topic sentences that point reader in the right direction. Citations are used well, and used frequently and effectively. The links are functional, and reliable. The content is relevant and well written, but slightly simple. The sections regarding remains and dated archeological digs need much more detail. There is no information regarding who had done the digs, or other relevant information regarding the archeologists involved, so information on that would be helpful. Any information regarding the amount of certain remains would also be good. Overall, this is a good start, and there are no major issues regarding the information or the sources and organization.