User:Kbm6cb/Gender pay gap/Peytonblakemore Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kbm6cb)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbm6cb/Gender_pay_gap?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender pay gap

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like this is a very objective, concise, and detailed summary of maternity leave regulations in the United States. There were no spelling or grammatical errors, and all sources seem to be objective. I noticed that there were no links attached to claims in the actual body paragraph, but I am not sure if this is because that function is not available in the sandbox.