User:Kboles2000/Gender binary/Jrrwfw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kboles2000, Man I love frogs, Tap3y9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kboles2000/Gender_binary?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender binary

Evaluate the drafted changes
I actually had this page as one of the five that I was thinking about editing, and the "Limitations and rejection" section was also what I wanted to break down and add to the most. What I liked about the suggested edits thus far is the inclusion of modern examples of celebrities breaking the standards set by the gender binary. Fashion is a great place to start adding nuance to the page that is relevant to modern life. I think a socially relevant thing to mention on this page could be the awareness around pronouns and popularization of other pronouns that aren't defined by the gender binary. It would be good to discuss something straight-forward like pronouns alongside academic critiques on the gender binary, and include examples of celebrities and activists who have a gender identity outside of the binary system. This topic is so broad and the gender binary is confining to so many different intersecting identities that there is a lot of space to maneuver within this topic and many directions to take your edits.

The biggest suggestion I have for your article is based on the lack of sources on both the draft and the bibliography page. I think that the celebrity example would pair really well alongside a modern academic journal critique of the gender binary. With Harry Styles, particularly, it might be useful to find an article discussing psychological gender differences and the potential benefits of men expressing more traditionally feminine qualities. I really like the direction this article edit is headed!