User:Kbrenya/Property Rights in Ghana/Owen.maier Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbrenya


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbrenya/Property_Rights_in_Ghana?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * None

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a really interesting article. The language is clear and largely unbiased, although maybe reconsider some of the superlative word choice in words like "completely" or "incredibly". I like the context given in the History section but think the article could benefit from some current news sources about modern problems or successes in property rights, something like when you talk about the Land Bill of 2016, but maybe add how this Bill has worked in practice. I think it's super helpful to speak to both statutory and customary laws as it paints a complete picture of Ghana, so great job on that front. In-text-citations will also be helpful for knowing which book supplies which info. So in general this is a very nice article that I think could benefit from modern day examples from news sources.