User:Kbroderick24/Education/Coffeyrh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbroderick24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbroderick24/Education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This user doesn't have a lead currently. Not having a lead doesn't strip away of the work drafted already within the body. The information I read was current and relevant to the topic of Education. Overall I'd state that the content added this far has been provided in a neutral manner. No claims appeared to be bias. The sources used were relevant to the topic. The first two links can be edited to add that hyperlink to prevent a copy/paste error. The sources appeared to be current reflecting on this topic very well. This student has only worked on the body so some of these questions do not apply. I genuinely believe not having a lead or other sections doesn't strip anything away from the work already contributed. As the user will have to expand their content and create a lead. The body was very well written and cited. The strengths was the information of the body. My only critique would be to add more information which will be done in due time. Overall this was a pleasure to read and well constructed.

K: Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to review my article! I do also agree with you in that I do need to add more information. I have continue to draft more on a separate document in order to get all of my thoughts out without putting out information that could be flagged by wiki! Specifically the links are something that I am still working on as I was having difficulty correctly creating them as they gave in the instructions. Again thank you so so much for looking over my article edits so far! I appreciate your feedback!