User:Kbroderick24/Education/SonnyBarnes1010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbroderick24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbroderick24/Education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading your rough draft to the article evaluation assignment, I think that you are off to a good start. The references you have in your article that you added having working links. They also have the proper citations in the references, which is good. The article as a whole flows well and does a good job of relying the information that is needed from the article. I thought that it was pretty cool that you were able to fulfill a request from October 2019 and add the proper citation to the article. The article body is off to a great start, you had one grammar mishap, but that isn't a big deal it is a pretty easy fix. The article is mostly neutral, but does have some leanings in it. I think this is find however, because you are just trying to fully explain what the argument behind or against is with countries viewing education as a positional good. I think that the quality of the article defiantly improved after your work on it.

K: Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to review my article! I did try my best in trying not to lean by just stating the facts! I will go through and reread and try to edit the information in order to keep it neutral! Thank you for pointing that out! Also I did see the grammar error and will fix that! Again thank you for pointing that out! I will take your comments and continue to improve the article! Thank you so so much!