User:Kbruce01/Comanagement in Canada/Anchovyue Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbruce01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kbruce01/Comanagement in Canada


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comanagement in Canada

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your overview of Comanagement in Canada is clear and concise, and organized in an sensible manner. Some points I noted below:


 * 1) Hyphen usage: is the omission of the hyphen in co-management deliberate? It seems like other conventional spellings include the hyphen.
 * 2) "Comanagement and Indigenous peoples" section could be better developed: I am sure you will be working more on this, but some suggestions for further development could be to expand on the historical context and also current state of affairs. You could maybe also include some more hyperlinks (e.g. 1999 Sparrow ruling).
 * 3) Interesting section materials with thorough use of sources. Your sections might benefit from having an introductory sentence that gives a more general review of the sub-section topic.
 * 4) Hyperlinks: not sure how much this is required, but I noticed that there are a few things you reference throughout the article that could be hyperlinked to other articles.
 * 5) If you're able to find some informative images, that might also help improve the overall readability of your article.
 * 6) Great work overall!

Looking forward to seeing more of your work on this. All the best!

Alice