User:Kbruce01/Comanagement in Canada/Eleios Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kbruce01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbruce01/Comanagement_in_Canada?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comanagement in Canada

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Summary at beginning a good overview of the topic
 * Quote at bottom of summary not cited however (in sandbox draft)
 * I'd try to be more consistent with using either "Indigenous" or "Aboriginal" instead of both
 * Statements were made with a neutral tone
 * Good array of examples to illustrate the term in the real world
 * Solid and diverse array of sources as well