User:Kcarreraholl/Émile-Jacques Ruhlmann/Gbalic Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kcarreraholl, Jdobrusk, Jessicalidberg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kcarreraholl/Émile-Jacques Ruhlmann - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Émile-Jacques Ruhlmann - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft is a good start for the introduction which should summarize all the content included in the article, stating Emile-Jacques Ruhlmann's biography, career, projects, and methods. The introduction doesn't need to get into specifics but is a good overview of who the designer is. It can be organized the same way the the content of the article is organized. The draft doesn't specify other designers for the introduction which is the main point of introducing Emile-Jacques Ruhlmann, unlike the existing article that includes Le Corbusier's name.