User:Kcarreraholl/Émile-Jacques Ruhlmann/KaitlynKropf1 Peer Review

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By reading the first paragraph the grammar and some sentence structure may need to be looked at and adjusted.

Biography- Information missing on the mother and fathers name, may be nice to have both added to the text. explain more about the relationship between designer Pierre and Emile, may help to have the paragraph flow and make sense for the reader. The info within the paragraphs is great but could be reworded and given a bit more detail to flow better. Add more images, maybe see if there are any images from the international exhibition of modern decorative and industrial arts that includes his word. See if there is any information on if the Great Depression affected his earning or business since he was known for his high end expensive furniture.