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Although Robscheit-Robbins's has never received Nobel Prize recognition for her work, she has personally denied the importance of such awards. Robscheit-Robbins believed that the success and impact of the experiment exceeds the credit due in her works.

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Whipple and Robscheit-Robbins decided to experiment using dogs since they were willing to eat a wide variety of foods and large enough in size such that they could be kept in healthy condition despite undergoing frequent blood sampling. Robscheit-Robbins was responsible for the care of the dogs and it was frequent of her to present them along with their finding at scientific meetings. They conducted these experiments by feeding the dogs "salmon bread" over a long period of time to maintain a steady output of hemoglobin. They would then add specific foods into the diet to test their effects on hemoglobin produced. The liver was actually the first dietary food to be tested, which would be later found out exceeded other foods in hemoglobin production. Beef hearts was first believed to most favor hemoglobin production, but it was soon tested to perform inferior to the liver. This work published in the American Journal of Physiology is regarded as the most important paper in Whipple's career as a scientist with Robscheit-Robbins being listed as the first author.

review by K8shep (talk) 18:40, 18 March 2020 (UTC)
1First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? What you have added so far, is very important. Keep this kind of addition up. Good sources below, too. I hope you get access to them. If not, let me know and we can find some for you!

2What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement? You could continue down this path of women and the Nobel Prize, if you wanted. Or you could add more to Robbins' life and work. Up to you!

3What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? Get into those sources and simply add MORE. Good work overall!

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While working with Whipple, Robscheit-Robbins has never obtained a higher position above a research associate despite planning and carrying out "Whipple's experiments".

Nobel Prize women in science: their lives, struggles, and momentous discoveries

by Sharon Bertsch McGrayne

Call #: Q141 .M358 1993

George Hoyt Whipple and his friends; the life-story of a Nobel Prize pathologist.

by George W Corner