User:Kclav15/North Creek High School/Graceyi11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kclav15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kclav15/North_Creek_High_School?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

I thought it was simple and concise. I think at first glance it would've been nice to add more information the lead paragraph such as the introduction or the basic information portion. like maybe add a sentence about the following content that the article is going to cover. Otherwise, I thought it was great!

Content:

Again, the content was awesome, glad that you added charts of the demographics of the school and the history/construction of the whole school itself. Anyways, everything was well-written and concise.

Tone and Balance:

The tone and balance of the article was solid, I didn't seem to think or come across thinking that it was biased or anything. There were no specific areas of the article where I thought were under or overrepresented.

Sources and References:

Looking over your sources and references, it looks good! It seems like you gained a lot of information from the actual school website which is great!

Organization:

I thought the organization of the information was great. You mentioned the history and construction process of the building in the beginning which was good because it gave us some kind of background information.Then you moved into further information about the student and school life.

Images and Media:

I didn't necessarily think you needed more images to aid the article, I think it was enough with the outer picture of the school, a location graph, and the animal of their school mascot was good.

Overall Impressions:

Honestly, I was really impressed with your article/draft I thought that you truly elevated the information that the previous changes. You added so much additional information, maybe you could add more in depth information in their sports section. Did the school win any competitions or maybe include like stats regarding this school? That's just an idea but otherwise, I thought your drafted article was well written and you definitely made the article better.