User:Kcobb123/Assistive Technology Acts/Megandeats Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Assistive Technology Acts


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article on Assistive Technology Acts was very well written and organized. The article started out by explaining Assistive Technology Acts and how they help people with hearing disabilities. This part of the article was very well done as it explains the overall meaning of assistive technology in a cohesive and concise way. Following this introduction, the article moves onto the content and the different acts that have been made overtime. In this part of the article, different sections explained different programs and acts of assistive technology. It starts out with its history which was written nicely and gave valuable information to the article. Then it went into more recent acts that were also written in a good way with a neutral tone. There were no grammatical or spelling errors, making it easy to read and understand. My overall impressions of this article is good and I think my classmates did a great job adding information. The article is more complete with the information they added because it gives deeper meaning to the Assistive Technology Acts. It was also organized very well as it followed the timeline of when acts were passed which made the sections very clear. Strengths of the additions made to this article was the further explaining what assistive technology is and how it is crucial for people with hearing disabilities. I also liked the part of the article that explained each State Tech Act Programs and how they are designed based on different states. The only addition that could be made to this article would be an example of how these acts are used in disability law cases. Overall, everything added to this article helped improve it and gave a better understanding of assistive technology.