User:Kcoreas1/Educational inequality in the United States/FlowerandFeast Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Kcoreas1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Educational inequality in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Educational inequality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)