User:Kday hill/User:Lanaklaib/Kevin Cole/Kday hill Peer Review

Overall, great content. There are a couple of things I would change:


 * First, in the Art section, I would change the structure a bit. I would have some specific art pieces with their title, date produced, medium, objective description/intent, influences. Instead of just the one paragraph. It may make reading it a bit easier.
 * Second, in the Exhibits and Collections section, I would add dates/years to each of the different locations just for clarity.
 * Third, the lead is a bit brief and stilted. All the information is there, it might just need a re-work to help it be a bit smoother to read.