User:Kdgheen/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Helicopter parent

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I love kids. Through babysitting and observing fellow classmates and friends, I have seen first hand the effects of helicopter parenting. Kids are meant to grow up. Parents typically proceed their children in death and thus need to be able to fend for themselves. Independence comes gradually. A child does not just stand up and run after they are born. It takes many previous steps such as crawling and practice.

Evaluate the article
Helicopter Parent is a well-written article. It gives vital information without showing partiality to being in favor or against the subject.The article cites many sources and has had over 500 revisions. However, more information would be beneficial pertaining to the effects of helicopter parenting.