User:Kdhartt/Michoacán/Almondmatcha Peer Review

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Kaila Hart (Kdhartt).
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Kaila has chosen to focus on the subsection "Crime" on the Michoacán article. When creating her Table of Contents she decided to keep the sections on the article, but to just add information and data. The crime section is very underdeveloped and broad, so it is smart for her to keep the sections and merely add information that explains the crime landscape of Michoacán. I think the article is already laid out well, so this keeps it organized and concise. Based on Professor Trudeau's suggestions, I think Kaila should look for more data sources and scholarly articles pertaining to the crime, which should be easy enough to find because it is well documented. One of Kaila's doubts/worries is that some of the articles subjects such as the individual gangs, link to their own Wikipedia pages, so she is unsure of how much informations she should add to this page. We decided that it would probably best for her to add little blurbs since her section is a brief overview.

Peer Review 2
Last week Kaila was unsure of if she wanted to add new sections, or just edit the remaining ones. This week, she has decided that she wants to add a section called "2006 and the War on Drugs." She thinks that by adding this section, she will be able to give more context and information about the crime and violence occurring Michoacán. She is also planning on adding statistics to the different sections as well, and I suggested looking at different indexes and subjects to really get a complete picture of the nature of violence in Michoacán. Lastly, one of the questions we both had for each other was about how much information we should add for subsections that had their own pages. We decided that we would both include the most important information on the groups in relation to our page content, and then add on to it if we had time. Kaila has so far done a good job at making sure that her page is balanced and neutral by adding statistics and data to back up her content.