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Article Evaluation

Diane Barwick

Content/Tone/Sources:

Small grammatical error under biography. I found that the way the biography section was ordered was perhaps a bit broad, but then again if they didn't have much to pull on then this would be appropriate because it would be worse to have several small sections. But it would have been nice to have subcategories like personal life, school, death etc. If possible, would have loved more details on her research. Tone didn't read biased, but it did feel like her own thoughts were underrepresented in general, not sure why. Links worked, sources relevant. Nothing going on in the talk page, just a comment on some changes from 2011 -- article start class or low importance. Part of WikiProject Biography/Science and Academia, Wikiproject Australia, Wikiproject Women scientists, Wikiproject Anthropology.