User:KeeLgd/Deforestation and climate change/Marcplummer82 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KeeLgd


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:KeeLgd/Deforestation and climate change
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deforestation and climate change

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the article draft I think that the changes regarding the lead helped with fixing sentence, making grammatically correct and sounds better when it reading. More specifically I thought that very first sentence you replaced adds more examples of what the effects of climate change are. Furthermore, I think the sentence you removed from lead helps a lot due to the fact that topic was not all related to deforestation and climate change. Thus, the lead content added does clearly describe the topic but I think there could be more added information regarding the sections and add more to detail to briefly explain them. Also in the lead I did notice that it does state the effects of climate change but does not really definition for the word climate change, which in my opinion would help. Overall, I think that majority of the lead is concise. The content added is relevant to the topic and is up to date. A piece of content that could be added is in human dimension of deforestation and climate change section is to add those two citations that are needed. I believe all the content is neutral and does not persuade the reader in one position. Yes, the sources are reliable that I clicked on and majority of sources are research based and news organizations. Furthermore, they are current sources and majority of the information is backed up by a secondary source. For the images in my opinion work well and helps give a proper visual to go with the information. Overall, I think the content is easy to read, well organized and edits helped with many of spelling errors that were made previously. I would say that one more thing that could improved upon is adding more current information regarding what is the current status of deforestation and climate change, also further explain future goals to help prevent this problem.