User:Keelimancino/Amelia Earhart/Kanagawar Peer Review

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 * User:Keelimancino/Amelia Earhart


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 * Amelia Earhart

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Hi I think you could talk about how Amelia Earhart's career was a huge turn for women in her time. Maybe even talk about the struggles she faced as a woman and how she fought to change them in her career. I am interested to see what sources that you will use and how you will incorporate them into your contribution to your article. Was she able to use her celebrity status to help women move forward in different countries or in the air-aviation field?