User:Keely320/Dindymene/Gilgamesher Peer Review

Hello!

I went ahead and read the article you chose, here are some suggestions I had;

I noticed that three was no source for the assertion that the name could have derived from Mount Dindymus; it is possible that the mountain was named after the deity and not the other way around, it might be cool if you could find a source to corroborate that statement. It might also be nice if you could balance the article by adding a few more references to the short list this article features.

Anyways, I hope this helps a little. Happy editing!

Gilgamesher

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