User:Keh18022/Bee hummingbird/FungiFish2020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Keh18022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Keh18022/Bee hummingbird
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bee hummingbird

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your current additions to the article are solid. Noting that the bird is endemic to Cuba is important. I am a little unsure of what was written by you in the draft, I read it with the assumption that the bold was what you added. All of the reference links work and your tone is neutral. I think that by adding something related to physiology you could strengthen the article overall and in terms of the class assignment. You have a good baseline, however more relevant additions are needed to really make an impact on this article.