User:Keithsea/Assembly of Notables/Sjstephe Peer Review

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It was fun informaton to learn that maria antoinette was involved in all this. I wish you gave a breif description of who the people you named are, specifically who calonne is and his significance, bc otherwise to a not history major it doesnt make a lot of sense. I can tell if I had context this would be very thoughouh and informative. I also wish the dates were written like May 1st or 05/01/whatever year it was, bc 1 may just doesnt sound like a date and confused me a little.