User:Kelfryn/David J. Grain/Eric godbout24 Peer Review

General info
JazenTully, Devin Stangle, Damon Martinez, Kelfryn
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kelfryn/David J. Grain
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
links to websites work flawlessly giving no trouble at all and quick to the information presented. Article does come off more as a journalistic piece than a standard Wikipedia page which is robotic and neutral as it acts like an Encyclopedia. For Jobs section last two sentences would reword it as again seems like a newspaper piece and not an encyclopedia entry. other than that information is clear and to the point, straight to the facts with no personal agenda.