User:Kelfryn/David J. Grain/Sethm2036 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Kelfryn/David J. Grain


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kelfryn/David J. Grain - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything is satisfactory based on the guide questions. The material on both the sandbox and biology is subpar. Each source can certainly provide additional information on each subject. The other issue is that you just have two sources; discovering additional sources can help provide more information.