User:Kellychen927/Nye Ffarrabas/123Hannahc123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kellychen927


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nye Ffarrabas
 * Nye Ffarrabas

Evaluate the drafted changes
-I am confused by this part after the first sentence: "participated in Judson Gallery shows at Judson Memorial Church in 1966-1968." It seems there is something missing at the beginning -Citations are needed in the beginning of the article

-For "Nye Ffarrabas contributed to Women's Work" how did she contribute?

-I am not sure if this is purposeful (if it is ignore this comment), but earlier her is used and later on their is used

-Overall, the article has a neutral stance

-The article is more complete with the edits made