User:Kellychen927/Sex robot/Jalfield Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Kellychen927


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sex robot (same as current version)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex robot

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I don't believe any edits have been made yet, so here are some important things I noticed when reading the article, and things that could definitely be further developed or made better.

The Lead could definitely be improved, as the short second paragraph provides very specific details. The first portion of the Lead is well written as it is brief and provides a description of the topic of the article. However, the second half of the the Lead does not provide an overview of the rest of the article; it instead jumps right to minute details about the topic of the article. A stronger, more developed, and less detail oriented Lead would really benefit the article. The article's content is up to date as recent references from 2018 have been added to the article. The article cites many sources that are functioning and verifiable, although, more information backed up by citations can always benefit an article. The references are from a wide variety of sources and authors, and many are available for the public to access. The current content of the article is neutral as it includes information from several perspectives, and even includes an "Opposition" section. The article is organized well, clear, and easy to read. The defined sections make for a very structured and digestible article. The talk page for this article is really helpful if you are trying to see what should be edited or added. I think the legislation and lexicon sections are the most underdeveloped, but additional information and citations would be useful throughout the article.