User:Kellychen927/Shigeko Kubota/Stark.ni Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kelly Chen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shigeko_Kubota&type=revision&diff=1018982797&oldid=1016509157
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Shigeko Kubota

Evaluate the drafted changes
- My first impressions of the article were that it was actually fairly well rounded and contained a lot of great information, especially in terms of the various installations and videos

- I liked the bit you added for the Vagina Painting, it is a very interesting piece of information that certainly adds to that part of the article

- If you are seeking to add more to the article, maybe more about Shigeko Kubota's life, as the biography section is by far the shortest. That being said, it seems that her art pieces are the more important part of the wiki article, so it is understandable if there is not much material available for that section.

- If possible, it would be great to see some more images or media of some kind in the sections about her art.

- The tone looks good - impartial and informative.

- Great job! If you add more information, keep in the same vein as you did with your first addition and it should be great!