User:KelseyStrom/Common knowledge/Zhoulez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kelsey Strom)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KelseyStrom/Common_knowledge?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Common knowledge

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)