User:Kemorri/Maria Grazia Spillantini/Ginamariebethany Peer Review

I think this is very interconnected to other wikipedia pages which I really appreciate. This always helps readers understand the broader picture regarding the person they are reading up on. I like that the lead tells us where she is now and why she is important. It is sort, to the point, and clear. The content is all very relevant and up to date, but I would love to see more. If you can find more information on her background beyond her education, that would be a great addition. I also noticed that this article is lacking a photo. I know they can be hard to find within the copyright rules, but if it is possible this would also be a great added aspect. I would also recommend trying to find a couple secondary sources to add. Overall this is a great start. The tone and organization are great and what you have along with the additions I mentioned would make a great article.

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