User:Kemorri/Nieng Yan/Tylersander11 Peer Review

General info
Kemorri
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Yan Ning
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Yan Ning

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think this article has been much improved. The lead is concise and summarizes the path of Yan Ning's career, but I think one thing it lacks is information about Yan Ning's contributions to the scientific community. I would have liked to see something mentioned about her work with membrane transport proteins. I think the "Early life and education" section does a good job of succinctly describing Yan's path through her education, but other than stating when and where she was born does not include any information about her early life. This is understandable however, because it was very challenging for me to find this information for my own article. While this information might simply not be accessible, if it does exist anywhere it would be good to include it. In my opinion the "Career" section is very well done, as it chronologically describes Yan's career and important moments within it. While it does state her area of research, I would have liked to see another section perhaps explaining more of her role within the area of membrane transport proteins and more about how she contributed to the field. I think the organization of the article as a whole is good, it is laid out in a way that makes sense. There were no images added, but again I experienced the same thing when editing my article, as there were no pictures available of my female scientist that adhered to Wikipedia's copyright rules.