User:Kemrishae/Cannula (archaea)/Tracegaskill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kemrishae


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kemrishae/Cannula_%28archaea%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is concise and well written. There doesn't seem much to change as the topic isn't overly complex. You did have the same exact sentence twice "When observed in close proximity, cannula appear hollow with a diameter of 25nm." This sentence probably fits best in the physical structures section. A rewrite under the cannula section might be appropriate. Other than that, maybe more sections related to the topic might be added? how it was discovered, who was involved, why it was being studied, etc...